I thought the piece was well done.
"its just a school assignment, women"
is that the title? If it is then i would assume that theres some feminist elements within the piece
1. How women are portrayed
2. The message
As for the medium, i would ditch the charcoal/graphite/pencil. The final piece needs some kind of paint or ink. Not a rendered finish but a sketchy one something with really fast motion. Try drawing with the paint or ink to loosen up the piece
google this guy
david johnson illustrator
he uses simple lines and bold shaped to bring out the faces
Loool, I love how a careless title could give out a person like you with a lot of thoughts. It's amazing of how something so simple can make an interesting thinking.
Oh and one more thing to add relating to that title, the irony thing is-- I'm a woman. I'm just saying this because it seemed like you must've thought my gender as male instead.
Sound like a good advice. If only my teacher would let me use non-pencil tool for such assignment... I shall research on that guy when I have time tomorrow! Thank you for this good critique!